Elf Line Art

The lines are really stiff, but somehow this piece stands out. I am able to understand that it is a profile of an elf, but it appears to be drawn out via either a mouse or track pad, a digitizer table with a stylus would help you out a ton if you don't have that already?

I'm not saying it's bad, it's actually very good, and I see a lot of potential with it. The ears could be a little rounded, and well.. it is difficult to tell where the neck transitions into shoulders towards the bottom right of the drawing. The chin is bothering me a little as I'm seeing sharpness right before the curve under the lip. Maybe that could be rounded a little bit? The lips look nice, however the jawline could extend down and curve upward, and for the Adam's Apple (AA), well... I know this isn't a "realist" drawing (it looks like you were going for an anime type of style) the longer line at the bottom of the AA almost isn't necessary as it could disappear enough to indicate where it would end. I really love the hair though, it's nice. however there's a line a little below the ear that looks like an error? I don't know if that was supposed to be an indication for the curve of the jawline, but if so, it could curve up a little bit more.

The eye needs a bit of work. It could either curve down, or you could maybe make the iris smaller?

The angle is a bit interesting, but the overall composition is nice. It just needs a lot of work here an there, and that comes with practice, and maybe looking at things with new eyes on a different day.

I hope my critique isn't too harsh, and that it made sense. Would love to see more of your work. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>